Magic of Flight (in concept stage)

This page just isn't coming together at all. It started off like this:

magic of flight concept no 1

and then that somehow got scrapped, and then tried this :

magic of flight concept no 2

But something was still not quite right, so there it has stayed. There is something in my head about this, but I am just not getting it right on the page. :(

Magic of flight concept 2 close up.. still something missing...

so its back to the drawing board or wait until the mojo comes back to do anything with this. Darn it.